Cobalt blue on the slope of her shoulder. Prussian blue in the shadows of the cloth, invaginations draping down. Dark doorway, too stark and straight. I'd angle it a little, much more lively that way —
“…tuned out, I think. Not really present. Dr. Green, are you SLEEPY? Would you like to lie DOWN?” She smiles into my face.
I have to respond. OK, I'll nod.…
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